Poem


POEM

My Sun of Life

In one of the bright morning day

You come to shine down on me

Oh my sun…

You give me your bright sunshine as warm as a selfless love

But…

Your shine can’t go through my window’s bedroom

Until the cloudiness cover your shape

The sun that always smiles there

You’re not appear for awhile

So does your warmth that I can’t feel anymore

I wake up from asleep and realize

The raindrop sound wetted on the roof of my house

I open my window’s bedroom and you’re not there indeed

The heavy rain blows my face

Remind me how important you’re in my life

Remind me how I miss your warmth

But, I have no power to control yourself

And I don’t know when will you come back

Oh… my sun

I’ll wait your presence to shine my whole room

To warm up my world

Until the rain will stop again at the end

By Selfy Parkit December, 11th ’2005

Analysis

Meaning

This poem is about a person (a girl) who meet someone who really love her, but unfortunately his pure love can’t make the girl fall in love with him. Even though the girl reject his love, the man never changes the way he treat the girl. This man is kind and always pay attention to the girl, but he has to go because the girl doesn’t want him to stay and care of her. In her loneliness the girl realize that she has lost him, she tries to search the man but she couldn’t find him. In her suffering she realize that how important the man for her. She begins to realize her love to the man when everything has been late. She can’t ask the man to come back, neither to love her once again. What she only can do is just wait and wish the man will come, love her again and bring happiness to her life.

My Sun of Life

(The man of life)

In one of the bright morning day

(In one of the day in the morning, in a sunny day)

You come to shine down on me

(you come and give me your love, caring, attention and kindness)

Oh my sun

(Oh my man…)

You give me your bright sunshine as warm as a selfless love

(You give me your love more than anyone had showed to me)

But…

(But)

Your shine can’t go through my window’s bedroom

(I can’t love you as you love me)

Until the cloudiness cover your shape

(Until I do something bad and rude and make you have to go)

The sun that always smiles there

(The man that always smiles there)

You’re not appear for awhile

(You’re not appear for awhile)

So does your warmth that I can’t feel anymore

(I can’t feel again your love, care, attention and kindness)

I wake up from asleep and realize

(I am conscious and realize)

The raindrop sound wetted on the roof of my house

(The tears and crying wetted my eyes)

I open my window’s bedroom and you’re not there indeed

(When the time I open my heart <the time I love you> but you’re not there)

The heavy rain blows my face

(The problems came to me in life)

Remind me how important you’re in my life

(Remind me how important you’re in my life)

Remind me how I miss your warmth

(Remind me how I miss your love, care, attention and kindness)

But, I have no power to control yourself

(But, I have no power to make you came back and love me)

And I don’t know when will you come back

(And I have no idea when will you come back)

Oh… my sun

(Oh… my man)

I’ll wait your presence to shine my whole room

(I’ll wait your presence to love me)

To warm up my world

(To make my life happy)

Until the rain will stop again at the end

(Until suffering will finally disappear)

The meaning in detail

connotation

Shine down = give love, attention, care and kindness

Bright sunshine = love

Shine = love, attention, care, and kindness,

Window’s bedroom = heart

Cloudiness = rude and bad things

shape = the man

The sun = the man

Warmth = love, care, attention, and kindness

Wake up from asleep = realize of to the stupid and wrong thing

The raindrop sound wetted = tears the roof of my house = eyes

I open my window’s bedroom = I open my heart

The heavy rain blows my face = the problems come to life

You warmth = your love, attention, care and kindness

To shine my whole room = to give love to my heart

To warm up my world = to give love, attention, care, and kindness to the girl’s life

The rain will stop again at the end = suffering will finally disappear.

Denotation

In one of the bright morning day

You’re not appear for awhile

Remind me how important you’re in my life

But, I have no power to control yourself

And I don’t know when will you come back

Figure of Speech

Imagenary

Visual Images        = Bright morning day, bright sunshine, shape, smile, appear

Aural Images         = The raindrop sound

A tactile Images   = Warm, warmth, realize, wetted,

Metonymy

sun = a man

Personification

The sun that always smiles there = the man that always smiles there

The heavy rain blows my face = The problems come in to my life

Oh my sun… You give me your bright sunshine as warm as a selfless love

= (the man give her love more than anyone had showed to her)

Symbols

Warmth = love, care, attention, and kindness

sun = a man

window’s bedroom = heart

Cloudiness = rude and bad things

The raindrop sound = tears and cries

The heavy rain = problems

To shine = to give love

Rain = suffering

Bright sunshine = love

Shine = love, attention, care, and kindness,

Wake up from asleep = realize of to the stupid and wrong thing

Tones

Guilty = (realize that she has done something wrong)

I wake up from asleep and realize

The raindrop sound wetted on the roof of my house

I open my window’s bedroom and you’re not there indeed

The heavy rain blows my face

Remind me how important you’re in my life

Remind me how I miss your warmth

Hopeful = (She doesn’t know what do to, and she only wait and hope the man will come back and give her love again).

But, I have no power to control yourself

And I don’t know when will you come back

Oh… my sun

I’ll wait your presence to shine my whole room

To warm up my world

Until the rain will stop again at the end

Diction or Word Choice

Figurative

The whole of the words that the writer choose are ordinary words, It’s only a story about someone who just sleep and can’t see the sun until the sun disappear because of cloudiness and raining. When she wake up from asleep, she realize that she miss the time and hope the sun will shine again to the earth and give warmth to her room. However, most of the words in a sentence of the poem are figurative such as Shine down = give love, attention, care and kindness; Bright sunshine = love; Shine = love, attention, care, and kindness; Window’s bedroom = heart; Cloudiness = rude and bad things; shape = the man; The sun = the man; Warmth = love, care, attention, and kindness; Wake up from asleep = realize of to the stupid and wrong thing; The raindrop sound wetted = tears and cries; the roof of my house = eyes; I open my window’s bedroom = I open my heart; The heavy rain blows my face = the problems come to life; You warmth = your love, attention, care and kindness; To shine my whole room = to give love to my heart; To warm up my world = to give love, attention, care, and kindness to the girl’s life; The rain will stop again at the end = suffering will finally disappear.

BAHKAN LEBIH

Oleh SelfyParkit

Alam semesta yang begitu tak berbatas

Menyimpan sejuta misteri

Bahkan lebih…

Begitu juga hal nya batin dan tubuh ini

Menyimpan banyak jawaban dari banyaknya pertanyaan

Bahkan lebih…

Batin dan tubuh ini yang kuanggap sebagai Aku

Terkadang menuntut untuk diakui keberadaannya

Mengajukan dan meminta segala keinginan

Bahkan lebih…

Tak kala batin dan tubuh ini terpuruk karena Dukkha,

terkulai karena usia,

terbelenggu karena kemelekatan.

Mereka meminta sejuta belas kasihan dan menyimpan ratap tangis

Bahkan lebih…

Tiada henti, terus berproses, tetap meminta

Sejuta, semiliyar bahkan lebih, keinginan terus bertambah

Sampai akhirnya batin dan tubuh ini menyadari ketidakkekalannya…

Menyadari apa sebagaimana apa adanya

Bahkan lebih…

Ia akan berhenti meminta, Ia akan berhenti berkeinginan

Ia berhenti untuk ia

Bahkan lebih…

Yang tersisa hanyalah kebahagiaan dan kedamaian sejati

Bahkan lebih…

Proverb


I must strong to face this world

I must brave to face every problem

I must patient to face my self

I must honest to face what I feel

And I have to because I’m great. J

Keep spirit

We can’t change the past, we only can change the future by living today

Aza aza fighting🙂

Keep Spirit

“Keep Learning, Be brave, discipline, patient, keep smile, do the right things, give happiness to myself and others. Trust to myself because I know I can do it.”

Jumat, 24 February 2006

INI PUN AKAN BERUBAH

Segala sesuatu di dunia ini tidaklah kekal, hanya kebenaran yang hakikilah yang dapat bertahan dari hukum tersebut. Ku tahu dirimu ada dan tidak ada sama artinya bagiku. Walaupun suasana dan keadaannya berbeda, akan tetapi artinya tetap sama dan tetap memiliki hukum yang sama.

–          Sesuatu yang datang suatu saat dia akan pergi jua,

–          Sesuatu yang pergi suatu saat mungkin akan kembali,

–          Segala sesuatu tidaklah pasti, hanya kematianlah yang pasti. Oleh karena itu, hari ini mungkin datang kebahagiaan bagi diriku, besok mungkin penderitaan yang akan mengisi hidupku

–          Penderitaan pasti berakhir dan kebahagiaanlah yang akan menggantikannya.

–          Kebahaguaan pasti ada akhirnya, dan penderitaanlah yang datang mengisinya. “Tidak ada pesta yang tak berakhir”

–          Hari ini dia menyayangiku, mungkin besok dia akan membenciku.

–          Hari ini dia membenciku, mungkin besok dia akan mencintaiku.

–          Hari ini mungkin Aku akan pergi selamanya, ataukah Engkau, ataukah orang lain, ataukah orang yang kita benci, ataukah orang yang kita cintai. Kita tidak akan penah tahu dan hal itu pasti akan terjadi, hanya tinggal menunggu waktu.

–          Hari ini Aku dipuji, mungkin besok Aku akan mendapatkan celaan.

–          Besok mungkin Aku akan dicela tapi selalu akan ada pujian di lain waktu yang akan Aku terima.

–          Pujian dan celaan datang silih berganti, tak ada satu pun yang kekal.

–          Karena pujian Aku bahagia, karena celaan Aku menderita. Orang yang bijaksana tidak akan terpengaruh terhadap celaan dan pujian. Cause everything can change.

Brave, I Must Brave

Berani.. Brave..

Aku harus berani menghadapi Penderitaan

Aku harus berani mengatasi kegelisahan

Aku harus berani mengatasi kemalasanku

Aku harus berani mengawasi bayang-bayang kebodohan, kemunafikan, kecongkakan, kebencian, keegoan, dan segala hal-hal negatif yang ada di dalam batinku.

Berani dan tidak takut akan datangnya Penderitaan

Berani dan tidak takut akan datangnya Kegelisahan

Berani dan tidak takut akan datangnya Kesendirian

Berani dan tidak takut akan datangnya Kebencian, Kebodohan dan Keserakahan

Remember:

If you’re breathing,

remember to think a good thing,

remember to think positively,

remember to do a good thing,

remember to do a right thing,

remember to speak a good and a right thing,

remember to control your thinking, acting, and speaking.

In order, watch your mind, mouth, and your action.

These are your practice every time and you must keep all of these in your mind. Remember!!!

Don’t do something that just waste your life and can make you forget to what is the right thing. Use your time effectively with a good thing.


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